Heather, I just wanted to say that this book was absolutely beautiful. It flowed so smoothly and nearly reduced me to tears several times. This was beautifully written and I am surprised you have not gotten more reviews on this. I could feel the main character's pain as if it was my own. Very skillful writing. I wouldn't change a thing, except, perhaps, make the ending not so sad. The ending nearly broke my heart. I am... Show more
I have to agree with the previous post. You definitely have a well organized voice. You have mastered how to write conversation between two characters and keep it fast paced. You provided a good opening with an immediate problem that Skye was in the process of working out. You continue to provide good conflict with boyfriend issues, mother issues, father issues and life choice issues. You pace it well, keeping the reader... Show more
In fact, I couldn't stop reading it. Very, very, very well-done. What a beautifully told tale, poignant yet not over-dramatic or self-indulgent. Your style is smooth and easy to read, and you've mastered the art of the short story in ways that I doubt I ever will but wish I could. Bravo, and thank you for posting one of the best-written stories on the site. I sincerely hope you decide to share more of your excellent work!
Hi, Judy. Thanks for your kind words! I would love to share other things I have written, and plan to someday. So far I have written two longer novels that are the beginning to (at least) a trilogy. They are my babies, however, and I want them polished and perfect before they are... Show more
Hi, Robynn. Thanks for reading Stolen Dreams and letting me know your thoughts! I will look over it and work on the Point of View switches!