THE HALF BLOOD

and the slayer By:
teeth15
User: teeth15
THE HALF BLOOD
Nick became a slayer just a few months ago and doesn't expect his two worlds to collide but when Janie, his long lost love comes into the picture, things get complicated because she's a half vampire and now everyone is after her.

  • Fiction
  • 1831 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 538
  • 10
  • Publication Date: 08-08-2011
Keywords: 
vampire, werewolf, slayer, love
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Nina Kari
Important Post
Nina Kari

Is this all of it? I hope not, it was pretty good. The structure was a bit off but the plot was really good. You should make paragraphs and make the dialogue longer or give more descriptions (Like is the dude a wolf or what?!!! lol really wanna know) and it would flow a lot better. Other than that it was very good. I hope-no- wanna see more :)
~Nina~

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