BookRix

Great, well written, is there going to be more? I hope so.

Carol x

Very interesting, sounds like an apocalyptic heat wave. Well done

to leave a comment - must have been the heat...whew...p

what happens next, wants to know, write more, Good luck

I was sweating just reading this. It's been hot here too (Montreal) But in the last couple of days we've had nice summer downpours, lightning and all.

Guyjay7

Nice narrative. The story reads easily. It has a kind of hazy hot day feeling of a small working class town. You describe it very well. I’d like to read more. I’d want to know more about Anna, her brother and Jason; I could feel the oppressing heat, the struggle to get yourself up in the morning and go to your mundane job. You have the makings of a good book.

Thank you for reading my story. Yes, the heat we've been experiencing was the inspiration for it.

I found this to be fairly interesting. Very realistic taking into account that this heat that we are encountering nowadays is horrible. Very good story... will you add more to this?

Blessings
-< - @ Meli

A lovely, descriptive story.
Chris