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come on finish the story its rilly

Great job, Danielle. Thank you for taking the time to proofread it so well. I love the story concept and the narrative is really well done. I look forward to reading more.

I also love the layout. One thing I did notice, though, is that the names of some of your characters have some character in it that's not showing up correctly. You might want to proof the book after it's published, figure out which character that is, and pick a substitute (probably the plain version of the letter).

You might also consider making it left-justified. It looks great in this font and background, but the full justification is doing weird things with contractions -- putting some of the extra spacing after the apostrophe.

Keep up the great work -- I look forward to more!

i'm loving this book so far i'm in the second chapters and i'm loving it plzzz keep writting

I will be adding more to the story soon. If you read it will you please comment and tell me how I could make it better? I'm all ears...well, eyes lol. Thanks:)