BookRix

Thank You so much for reading my book.I hope you are well!

also reading your poems may magically help healing...

Thanks Petra!

The first two, Why and From Sorrow to Acceptance, were strong openers!

Writing is magically cathartic, isn't it Franny?

Blessings! Petra :))

Beautiful, is but one word to describe the art that you have created using your words. Beautiful, simply enough.

I realize there are a couple of poems that need a lot of work.I will be much more careful with my next collection of poems.Thanks Joe for your comments!

Hello Lovingpath,

A handful of poems are from a previous book.As for my poem,"Give Me A Kiss",It's not based on a current relationship.Thanks for the read!

...I remembered a few of these, but that's o.k. They were just as beautiful the second time around.
I was strolling along, doing my 'teary-eyed' thing, and then..."wham"! "Exotic Dream on the Bus"...:) Good to throw that in there.

I lost a sister and Mother one week apart 25 years ago. So much of this I can very much relate to. I have books full of 'unfinished business'. I could never put all that pain into words deep enough to fill that hole in my soul. I gave up trying. You have captured a lot of the hurt that I was looking to find the words for.
I loved the alternating themes. You capture a beautiful image of the love and life with your partner now (I'm guessing that's who you're talking about)...your 'father figure', and God. You seem to have come full-circle to peace.
Your rhythm is good, and your imagery is beautiful. I very much 'feel' your work.

Beautiful Fran!

Robin

Snow adventure could use some help but Still my Brother is my favorite. The tears poem is so true that i know exactly what you are talking about. There is a time when you simply can not cry any longer; that is when healing begins./joeparente
"THE RECIPE" has been written for the family contest. Please read if you have not done so. thanks./joe/Star for your book!