THE GREAT WHITE WOLVES! SPIRIT OF THE FOREST!

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THE GREAT WHITE WOLVES! SPIRIT OF THE FOREST!
This is a story that is comming soon when I have fully completed it. But it is about a rare species of wolves with uniqe powers and adventures. They are called The Great White Wolves, and I have created them up. They are gigantic white wolves with a single lightning strike on each of their sides ranging in all sorts of shades and colors and their eyes match the colors of their strikes. Their powers varies from the colors and some can be more uniqe than others. Their mission in life is to keep peace withing the Forest and keep everything balanced while remaining a strong spirit of the Forest, protecting all that lies within it from anything that wants to cause it any harm.

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robbedbygreed

The story starts a bit slow, but it's interesting :)
You do, however, go in-between past and present-tense at some points in the story.
The story, again, is a bit slow, so maybe speed it up just a tad?
Otherwise, it's very nice. Keep on writing!

---RbG

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