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Please update this book I want to know what happens please....

I love it and I hope you are updating really soon

OMG!!!! I MUST know what happens!!! Awesome book!!! Please let me know when you update :)

when are u going to update?

this is a great book...keep it up! i love it

Update soon PLEASE!!!

I think you should mention her scar on her forehead and maybe say how she hates it and how it makes her feel ugly???
ok, on page 67 and 69 you go from personal to thrid person and back and forth... oh on page 67 you say her name is Saphire again, i dunno if ya ment to or not, and i dunno if you know but page 70 is blank... so yeah lol sorry if this isnt cheery, but i write my review as i go and this is the third time i was really stupid and went to a diff page and erased my comment...anoyin lol
WTF Oz has a girlfriend???? Maybe you should say another reason Oz likes his girlfriend because she hasn't got an ugly scar on her face??? Not only is Oz being a detective undercover and searching for info but he also has a girlfriend he has never mentioned!!! not cool, Oz, not cool....
jeez, gettin kidnapped, but Chrises guys, not very fun.... she should have just ran, she said she hated hr brother cause he gave drugs to Kelsey....
I am enjoying the pace of the story, im still waitin for Oz to turn into a arsehole, he may have been lying to her and decivein her but i still think ya need him to be assy and smug when he comes to save her... i mean, he does save her, right??? Riiiiiggggggghhhhhtttttt????? :O
lol KMU this books goin well, apart from some spellin and grammer mistakes, its goin well, we all make mistakes so its all good lol

Awww! It ended! Just when it was getting interesting...oh what a shame. Update soon!

~Cheyenne(:

first thing, page 19 and20, first his names James then Jason, i had to read the pages twice to make sure it wasnt a diff chracter, might wanna fix that :) oh, and page 22 on the first paragraph on the last word there is a " speech mark, needs to go my friend lol sorry, detail freak lol
on page 35 on the second paragraph for one sentance ya go to third person then back to personal, another detail i never fail to mis lol sorry but page 36 is just a confusin mixture of thrid person to personal and then third person, its very confusin.... look its late were i am. il finish readin it tommorow, give ya time to fix up a bit :)