Hello Eug3ne,
I do not know why it took me so long to intercept your transmission, but I am glad I finally did. Your programs were skillfully executed, and the only suggestion I can offer is that a larger font size would have been nice, even for robotic eyes. ;) The onamatopoeitic qualities of your poem "Nothing Other Than Itself" reminded robottina of Verlaine's "Chanson d'Automne", except that the content of your broadcast... Show more
Fine use of language, striking images. I've given you a vote. Wd you like to look at mine? Also page 2, "You've Got To Be Joking" is quite different. I'm very partial to humor. Let me know what you think of it. If you like it, consider giving me your vote.
Kind regards,
elcampbell
Now the picture is complete. Wonderful poetry and a nice cover! God Bless!
Eugene,
Bravo fellow poet! The greatest compliment I can give you is that there are many lines in your beautiful poems that I wish I had written. Other than our opposite thoughts on skiing, we are truly on the same page.
A vote for you.
Peace,
Dennis
I was pulled into each poem by your masterful flow. I would like to let you know though, that in all of the contests before there has been a condition saying all books had to have a cover. You might want to check on that, because you can still add one. I would hate to see your book disqualified for something that simple. God Bless you and good luck!
Dear Donna, thanks for the kind comments. I didn't know about a cover requirement, and will have to look at the contest rules again. :)
Your descriptions were so vivid I could picture the places you described. I love this style of writing. Good luck with your poems!:)
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Robbotina, thanks and good luck. I've posted a comment on your collection, and added it to my favorites.