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Only, there is a section where you say, Picture it.
It's a place where the lightning strikes all around; while the thunder rolls its echoes against the mountains. I don't know, just my thought. It's up to you. It's just haven't heard of anyone writing, Picture it, when describing a scene. Otherwise a very creative story. :)
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