Really good imagery and great lines sprinkled throughout make this book a good and thoughtful read. My only suggestion is that in the editing, please note, sometimes the title or one word or one line appears on a page followed by the poem on the next page.
Peace,
Dennis
Hello 3ric,
I have intercepted your signal, and found it to be of excellent quality, free of static, and with ample bandwidth! I truly enjoyed all of your transmissions, but my favorites were "snow stomp" (because of the microchip imagery...so robotic!), "angels drift", and "depression's wings". Thank you for the shareware! If you'd like, please intercept my signal containing robotic poetry.
Good luck!
robottina
sorry. having been assimilated back into the h-beings...my kraft don't werk real well. if i ever think of something to input, i will.
Poetry written right from your Soul,
give yourself credit for knowing more than you think you do...
greetings Sternschnuppe!
thanks. when you 'put yourself out there' it's nice to get such glowing feedback. am happy.
And you did definately cleave my soul. Wonderful work! God Bless and good luck!
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