Hi ELizabeth, Why would the protagonist "wish upon a star" if she knows she's the chosen one? Anyway great start for a longer story. I voted for you. Augustus.
You have the talent to become a good author someday. Try to post this e-book in the Fantasy and Science Group so that other members with the same interest as yours can check it out. Just continue to write and share your stories. Good luck!
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