I've read all of your works posted so far and I've noticed how much you've matured since your first book.
The structure and word usage in "Poem five" of this book, are a fine example of your growth. I also liked poems four, and two, but poem 5 is quite in a league of it's own. Very well done.
Keep writing, and if you continue to develope your skills at this quick rate, I can see a very promising future for you...:).
Your new friend,
Robin
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