Book One of the Eliza Blayne series is done.
Haven't updated the important post in a while I guess, since it only goes up to chapter 14.... Well its been updated a lot since then, chapters 15-27 are also up...
Haven't posted about the updates here in a while(not since I finished chapters 7 and 8) Well, now chapters 9-14 are also up, exciting things are happening to Eliza, check it out!
I have not read the whole book yet, but it's really good. However, I would go back through and re-read it if I were you, because I caught a few errors that involved commas, and sometimes misspellings. Also, you have a really good cover, but I think the font should be a bit more blocky and less elegant. And finally, at the beginning, the word "mass" is used a quite a bit. I love this book and am going to finish it. I hope my... Show more
haha fair enough on most of those points, maybe you should check out the edited version(that is also posted)
also, errors in commas are a writers prediliction, we add them to add emphasis to a word or phrase with a pause before continuing, there is always a reason for it, even if you do not intellectually agree :)
Ok, sorry. I have a bit of OCD when it comes to books.
no i get it, sometimes people interpret commas their own way. However, a comma is used to add dramatic pause, or distinction in words, so try reading it as such, without interpreting. If I put a comma its for a reason. some people have also disagreed with my use of... Show more
I'm legit curious about the misspellings tho, because I use proper english and run the grammar/spell checks multiple times, so if you think something is misspelled I need to know, so i can see if its a legit error, or a false purposeful spelling on my part, like Wylder, is... Show more
I love it,it's well wrighten and I do not see any errors.Thanks for. Making
Very well written. Hoping for more.
Thanks, glad you liked it. I'm working on finishing up the book. Then I'll be starting on book 2 and book 1 will be going to editing
Loved it!! Looking forward to book 2.
loved it!!!
please hurry up with the update!!! :)
I just updated it lol....like 2 hours ago
I love it. A work of art.
What you talking bout, the cover art?
That and how Feral Heart starts off. Nice job.
ohh lol i was gonna say, there is no way you read it all that fast
Lol
The book is great. Loved every part of it. Please update soon
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It's actually getting close to the end up the book, so I'll be finished soon and I always post/mail about updates.
Ok can't wait. Email me when updates are up
Yeap. Once I'm done with it I'll be starting on the second book in the series, but I won't post it until I get the cover art back from my artist friend
Cool