Ahh! You suck! I was so into it and then you just stopped! So is he dead?!?! Please keep writing :)
Not bad my friend. I really like the descriptive language and the way everything is set up. Good Job.
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lol no you wont.
Bones52
Try me
Deleted User
jeez. you sound like my uncle when i told him his room smelled like something died. and i told him it might've been sasha his ferret that ran away.
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Cute. what was it like 100 words long? jk. It's good short story. spelling is much better
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Bones52
That's because with my other one, I didn't have spell check with the program I used.
Bones52
(plus, most of my spelling errors were typos.)
XxLauhLunaxX
this is the one im reading right now
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oh look 'raven' read it
oh lol, not this book xD sorry, i was thinking you were talking about another book of mine. But the reason i killed him off is because it was a demonstration of how unfair the justice system can be.
Wow. I wouldn't of guessed tht........
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