The Haunted House

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The Haunted House

'The Haunted House' is the story about a little boy Henry who is trapped by a vampire in the Haunted house. The story reflects his bravery and the ways he chose to help his friend who was also trapped in this house to move out of it and kill the Vampire.


  • Fiction
  • 1634 Words
  • Ages 8 and up
  • 877
  • 6
  • Publication Date: 04-20-2016
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Deleted User

Wow good job on this book!

judycolella
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judycolella

What a well-constructed story! I am highly impressed, and expect you to become a famous writer one day. You have all the raw talent it takes - just don't ever stop writing. Great work!

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Dhruv Bhachawat
Dhruv Bhachawat

Thanks Judy for your appreciation! I am inspired by your words :)
Thanks!!

judycolella
judycolella

You're most welcome! ')

Layla Sparks
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Layla Sparks

nice kid's story :)

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Dhruv Bhachawat
Dhruv Bhachawat

Thank you Ms Zahra!

Layla Sparks
Layla Sparks

if you're really just 8yrs old, you're quite a good writer compared to most 30yr olds on here! There was just some point of view mistakes but you have your whole life to practice! :) keep on writing

Dhruv Bhachawat
Dhruv Bhachawat

I was just 7 years old when I wrote this....I published it now. Thanks for your appreciation Ms Zahra!

Layla Sparks
Layla Sparks

wow and you're very welcome:)

Dhruv Bhachawat
Dhruv Bhachawat

:)

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