Do you have any ideas of how i could like revise it?
One thing that would really help is if you revise the grammar and spelling in your Blurb. That might help attract more readers and will make it a lot easier to understand the story.
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Royalty
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This is just the start i will continue editing till i get all 12 chapters. :D thank you for reading
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Desiree
HEY IM NEW I LIKE YOUR BOOK
This is just the start i will continue editing till i get all 12 chapters. :D thank you for reading