Through poetry, you present a visual picture of what you experienced. I enjoyed reading about the places with your word pictures. Thank you for sharing your work.
love the book, took me too a beautiful journey as well. Thank you.
Thank you johnceaser.
Peace,
Dennis
I'm so sorry, Dennis. I read your book early yesterday, took notes, and something must have distracted me, because I neither gave you my comments, nor voted. And I really trully loved your book.
I noted several poems that I particularly liked, but the very last one: The Journey Begins with the First Step Within" Is a winner. It really brings the book together. You did a good job.
Carmen
An outstandingly beautiful narration of
the journey during sunset all through the
Florida sites. Thanks with brightening star.
Thank you for your comment on my book, "Driving Towards the Sunset". Would also take the time to read my other book, "Winter is Not for Skiing". It is entered into the winter poem contest. If warranted, a comment, a vote and adding to your favorites would be most appreciated.
Peace,
Dennis
I truly enjoyed traversing the country with you through your poetry. You have captured the essence of many of the places I too have trodden. Being a Florida girl, I can relate to your piece on Sanibel quite well. If I weren't such an adventurer at heart, I just as well might be stretched underneath a beach umbrella for the balance of my days too.
Nice work ~ good luck with your manuscript.
Karis Vail
Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Travel Stories".
(You may get into problems with 30 pages
if you don't shorten somewhere, since
contest rules allow just up to 25 pages.)
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Hi Patricia,
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
Dennis
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