that was really good, and despite the fact that i'm going to cry myself to sleep tonight - i need to say that your writing style is really great - intense and dark - but great. this was a really interesting idea.
are all your stories so dark? i will go and find out!
I was told that I would love your work, this book in particular, but I had no idea. To say I love this would be an understatement. I truly love your style and verse. This was a very usual story in the way you presented it. Usually yet smart, it drew the reader in at once and held them until the very end. I won't say more, but yes sir. I will be watching your work closely.
What a nightmare. How crazy to think that people like that are out there. Gave me the creeps!
I noticed a few typos, such as "were" instead of "we're" but apart from that, very good. You really captured a young adult's mentality. It was very difficult for me to stop turning the pages.
Dude, that gave me goosebumps. Oh my gosh.
*SPOILER*
It freaking turned into a Japanese horror movie at the end. I love it!!