I have to say, I've never been a fan of the journal or letter style storytelling but the way you do it is captivating. I've never read anything all the way through without dialogue in it until I read your writing. You have mastered the craft of projecting a voice through your story. I'm in awe.
ANGELUS SANGUINE
By: DENNIS H GORDONTHE TRUTH OF THE WORLD OF VAMPIRES AS TOLD BY ONE OF THE ONLY SURVIVING MEMBERS OF HIS SPECIES. HE ALONE CARRIES THE WEIGHT OF A MYSTERIOUS AND WORLD SHATTERING EVENT THAT RIPPED FROM HIM ALL HE KNEW IN A SINGLE MERCILLESS EXTERMINATION OF HIS KIND. LIKE A BIBLICAL APOCALYPSE THE GREAT VANISHING HAS HAUNTED HIM FOR CENTURIES AND HIS TIRELESS AND DEADLY PURSUIT TO ANSWER QUESTIONS BEYOND THE PURVUE OF MAN AND VAMPIRE ALIKE IS TAKING HIM TO THE THE BLACKEST CORNERS OF A WORLD FAR DARKER THAN HIS. IN A SEEMINGLY BOTTOMLESS ABYSS OF HIDDEN TRUTHS AND CRUEL DECEPTIONS WHICH HE ONLY THOUGHT HE WANTED TO PURSUE. A QUEST FOR LIFE, LOVE, AND LONG BURIED SECRETS HIDDEN BY AN UNHOLY ALLIANCE OF THE VATICAN AND HIS OWN PEOPLE. HIS ONLY DESIRE IS TO FIND HIS SOUL MATE.
Actually I have written a great deal more and it becomes a narrative very early on. The opening was only written as a an experiment for introducing certain information to the reader.
Thank you for all your kindness.