GRAMMAR!
Minimal but edit where necessary, including the blurb.
FIVE PAGES, NO, FOUR?!
I would enjoy reading more then I can give a sound verdict. Keep writing. :)
A boy who had a perfect normal life and couldn't wish for anything more, is forced to reconsider that, because normal life isn't for everybody.
On that fatefull evening, he received two unexpected people who would change his life forever, and the people he expected to protect him from their insanity didn't bother to do anything. He thought they were his parents but it was just a facade.
And his real parents were like nothing he would've expected, and they brought a whole new life with them.
What would he do? He couldn't just accept his life to take a turn just like that.
But would he be able to hold both ends, without dropping the other or both of them? Would he be able to be normal and then at the same time face this new life?
GRAMMAR!
Minimal but edit where necessary, including the blurb.
FIVE PAGES, NO, FOUR?!
I would enjoy reading more then I can give a sound verdict. Keep writing. :)
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