Please update this book I want to know what happens please...
It's good... BUT it could be so much better. First I think a good edit will clean up a lot of the errors but it really should be entered into our word processor one chapter at a time. If you would do that you would be shocked at what a difference it makes. I would suggest a less sensational cover with built in suggestion. It would be more acceptable to our censors when you go to publish.
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