Important Post
I have read all 9976 words. Please update.
Important Post
I like the story but i have only read a little bit of it, but i picked up on one thing can you read your sentences again and just check them because sometimes i makes it hard to understand what your trying to get across. i know from experience that readers won't read your book if they can't understand it.
You have a good story i really like it but just improve on the pint i told you about. besides that i think it awesome.
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Davi
ok i will do and thanks for the advice. i was just trying it out but i'm glad u like :)
Davi
also want to thank u for adding beautiful nightmare to your favs :)
Faith.Raven
No problemo amigo ;p
Davi
just added a new chapter please read and hope you enjoy. comments are welcome :)
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