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jim0865

If you're interested in being a good writer, you are well on your way.

just slow down on the fast typing a bit.

I was reading wanting to know what was going to happen to the angel and you typed,

"I played her down in the tied."

And because I'm really old, 15 neurons in my brain had to call for backup in my "boggle" file to realize that (I think) you meant to say...

"I laid her down in the tide."

At first I was asking myself,
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