Important Post
i think its good, it just needs a lot more detail. it happens a bit to fast.
Amelia lived with her boyfriend Lucas for two years before they got married. She loved him dearly, until he began abusing her. She had left her home being able to free herself, she found herself living in Atlanta.
Watch as Amelia life takes the toil of abuse and tragedy......
All Books in this Series:
| Dear Future Husband Danielle | Free |
| Dear Future Husband Characters Dannielle | Free |
Posts and Comments
NiaTheCatThatSmilesBack
okay thanks for the honesty
and its all happening so fast because of the vast amount of things I have to take place in the story but thanks anyway XD
well, to draw in a reader, you want to leave them hanging and put more detail so they aren't taking in so much in a small period of time, that can confuse the reader, and if they're like me and read the whole thing in less than four minutes, you're gonna want to put more detail in.
oh and it can use some editing, some grammar, spelling and punctuation mishaps in there that need to be edited.
the story is finished yet i'm still editing it