You seem to have combined the lore of the Universe with images from various mystical cultures and swirled them all together into a beautiful, flowing tale of power, betrayal, love and justice. You're very talented and I'm so glad you posted this. I look forward to reading more of your work. Awesome stuff!
a tale told almost like a play - a story not for the faint of heart.
I shall be reading more of your work.
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Interesting tale of yore. I perticular like the butterfly effect caused by the dialogue between the king and his court jesters.
The passing of the baton from the queen to the wizard and then to the dead jester surpasses most of what i envisioned. In this case the present was the past...and the past was yet to be nurtured. At the end the winner takes all, and peace reigns once again.