I really like this book but there are a few changes that I think would be beneficial to it and please please know I am just giving advice, don't get offended by it and you don't have to take it if you don't want to. There are a few grammatical errors and a few places where you used the wrong name, like you called cj alex at one point and scarlet you called violet and there were a couple other spot like that and then you only... Show more
I really like this book but there are a few changes that I think would be beneficial to it and please please know I am just giving advice, don't get offended by it and you don't have to take it if you don't want to. There are a few grammatical errors and a few places where you used the wrong name, like you called cj alex at one point and scarlet you called violet and there were a couple other spot like that and then you only mentioned supernaturals about 4-5 times in the whole book and since it is a book about supernaturals I think you should have went into that more. I really like your plot and characters they are fabulous.