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the poems are remarkable , and so very well pinned i love every piece but my fav the strange state ... bravo

The first poem is beautiful, as if I were watching a movie!
The second made me smile, recalling the movie.
The third feels like I'm wandering through my own thoughts and emotions. It puts into words what every human being feels at one time in his or her life.
The fourth is awesome, beyond my words. I think if one were to make it into audio form, it would send a chill down the spines of its listeners. I'm actually contemplating creating an audio or video version for you... hmmm ;)
The fifth is spectacular, and wraps up the wholesome perfectly.

Overall, a perfect set of poems. Absolutely perfect.

---RbG

I enjoy them,but Crossroads was my favorite.

Review - Poetry is so subjective to perception. My very favorite stanza:

Utterly worthless
They'll remain jailed forever
If not written down

I so wish this was my problem. Unfortunately they flee if I don't write them down. LOL But it is an awesome thought caught in black type. The "Power of Words" and "This Strange State" are two of my favorites in this collection. The first stanza of "The Raft" I could see and feel clearly. When a poem can elicit a connection with the reader, you have done you job well as a writer.

Overall I'm not a poetry fan, but you write poetry I like reading. Wonderful job. Robynn