Wow. I actually wasn't anticipant of this. I read along and I like it. Nicely done :3
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This is so good. I love the way you paint the picture with words. It is like an epic poem.
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confusedalarms
Thanks Ken!
At the risk of giving you a swelled head, I believe this short piece is a work of art.
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confusedalarms
Don't worry, my head's already swollen, like most people's. It's the human condition. Thanks though.