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As the title indicates, this is a very bleak book of poems. Very bleak indeed.

---RbG

Your words really cause us to relive those dark, down periods of life. I look forward to reading more from you.

Normally I don't read others poetry, mine is usually enough for me but I liked yours. None was sappy or common in structure. I appreciated that. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

Potery isnt normally my thing, and i suck at writin it, but i will judge it with the work i have read.
The way your the web of words knit together to create a soul touching creation baffels me, but you seem to do it in a way i cant explain, its as if its gentle music playin in my mind.
I dont beleive many people have a talent for petery, but you dont dissapoint :)

Jaco,

You have written a very interesting, thought provoking, and touching book of poetry. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Great job!

Review - Hmmm..for having such a colorless title, there is quite a bit of color in these poems. You capture well the mundane existence of many, lost in a land of gray. These are slices of ordinary lives, with extraordinary pain. Well done job. Robynn

Poetry is the language that touches the soul, and your poems do that very well.

Keep writing, you have a rare talent.