Hi there... I have started reading your book. I am on page 11... so far it is interesting, however, you may want to do a spell check on it. In your blurb- you spelled "journey" wrong. People may see that and not find you a credible author. Also, on your cover you have misspelled Midnight. On page 10 you have goody too shoes- I would suggest "goody two shoes". Please don't get upset with me for pointing these things out... I... Show more
Hi there... I have started reading your book. I am on page 11... so far it is interesting, however, you may want to do a spell check on it. In your blurb- you spelled "journey" wrong. People may see that and not find you a credible author. Also, on your cover you have misspelled Midnight. On page 10 you have goody too shoes- I would suggest "goody two shoes". Please don't get upset with me for pointing these things out... I... Show more
wow you really are a real person!!! lol yeah its just the first couple of capters. i put the preview edition on unedited just to see if real human people would take the time to read it. i am not mad at all and i will defnetly make the two shoes fix. thankyou very much for your input!!!