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i will agree with tigerstar you did kinda rush but is really good. really long too.
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chocolatemeerkat
I will hold my hands up and admit I rushed this, however I was a quite a bit younger when I wrote this and without rushing, this one long book would have probably made a massive series :p Also, I tend to drag on a fair bit, therefore the majority of books are long and I have... Show more
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now i get it. you where younger. I think i tend to rush a bit but i am working on it. i am young only ten.
Flying Changes
Yeah kind of rushed it a bit and it is really long.
Flying Changes
But its good.
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i agree
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Its really good so far I like the plot but it's going by WAY TO FAST. But I like it :3
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Wow, so sorry for the 198 pages. :o I never realised it was that long
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