BookRix

Wow! I felt as i were there with you. And your honest opinion of your own actions through the window of time was so well worded. Though you stated, 'it could have been way worse' it did not need to be worse. And I understand the idea of that 'bubble' of innocence and love. Once it pops, how can you gather it together again? I loved it. Fantastic book.
Lions

way to go you made me tear up...
i loved it though...

omg this waas very good.... i hope u won

I am happy that someone can put their teenage struggles on paper -- teenage years are the worst because truthfully, you just don't know yourself well enough. So many teenagers go through hell and talking about it, or just writing it down can really inspire other to do so themselves. Which is a good thing to do because its a therapeutic way to get their emotions out.
thank you for the inspiration you are putting on others.
This was great and well written.

Review - The innocence you lost is at the heart of this gut wrenching story. You have a tender heart. It is clear you have a sharp conscience as you can feel what you did right and where you were wrong. You were able to put it into the written word well. It isn't easy to bare your soul to the world. Great job. Robynn

A terrifying and gut-wrenching story. Congratulations for having the courage to replay the events on paper, and sharing a very personal and tragic experience.

i understand where this story is coming from i have a similar history. very well written and intriguing

That is so sad. Great book!!

I like this. The detail of the story and the fact it had me gripped. I hope you do get the chance to put things right. It is hard for the child, but it must be as equally hard for the parent. I do not have children myself but i always think "i'll do this differently or i'll do that" if i have children but i'll probably end up having a similar approach to my parents. They were children once and I think a child even if Parents are good or bad will always look back and think why did they do this or they should have done this better. But when you become a parent yourself your children probably think the same about you, or question your aprroach when older. i should imagine.

Reading this in the middle of Algebra was a bad idea. I got tears in my eyes reading this book. Chloe Knox this short story was amazing. YOu are an excellent writter! I love this!!!!!!!!! Keep up the awsome work!!!!!!!!!! :D