BookRix

I love this book so far, ooh I can't wait until you continue it. :D

i really liked this story and i cant wait to read more of it. please continue with your work and i cant wait to read more

As an American, I had some furrowed-brow moments (a six form? What?), but like the way your main character has been written. He's very personable, has a wry sense of humor, and is very real. In fact, he reminds me of some of the kids I was closest with in school. Since this is just a start, I won't say much about the grammar and typo stuff - I'm sure as you continue to work on this, you'll see the errors and make corrections. The most important thing, though, is to continue developing both the characters and the story along the same lines. I think this will be an excellent, well-told tale that also gives the readers valuable insights. I like your heart.