Out of the Ordinary

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Out of the Ordinary
Kasol isn't any Précieux, but a special one. But being "out of the ordinary" is no good. It brings danger out for Kasol. More people fight for her to be on their side and Kasol is just "lost in time".

  • Fantasy
  • 1130 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 264
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 11-21-2011
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gemstone7777777

Very intresting, enjoyed the plot and everything that was going on! I can't wait for more!! It had me hooked and everything going on flowed nicely. If I could give you any advice, I'd say slow it down a tiny little but still its very good! :)

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I liked it. It was very easy to read. Like that you spaced things out.
Good story, would have liked a moment or two more of interaction with mother or her world before the 'situation' (dont' want to be a spoiler)
anyway - it was good - please write more.

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