Oh wow. This is kinda like my story: Impossible. Except it has nothing to do with stars. Or Greek stuff. But, it is going to have spirits in it. And I'm like wow. This makes me look like I'm copying her. But I promise I'm not! I just heard of your book not 4 min. Ago. So I'm sorry if you think I'm copying you, but I'm not :I
Just a comment on the technical side, it shouldn't be "air to the throne." The correct way to spell it is "heir to the throne."
That aside, I'd like to say that the story itself is great. I think it would do well in the market ;) However, I think you need to work on developing your character(s) a little more. And I don't mean listing qualities about them, but SHOWING me who the person/character is through their actions and... Show more
Ok thank you, I will work on these points! And wow really!? thanks for the advice :)
Ok ok ok. I finished the last 3 pages. Now it's not like it. Sorry :3
Oh no it's absolutely fine! I don't like own the idea of books with mythical things and spirits lol!! Thanks for reading tho! I hope you enjoyed it! :) I'll be sure to check out your book(s) soon! I don't think your copying me it's fine!
Aw thanks :3 I was really worried about it
Aww no it's fine! There's no need to be worried :)