BookRix

Some of this is amazingly accurate. Still there is much more that can go on in our minds, even when they let us out.

Lost my mind for a while after my first wife died. Hope you understand.

At any rate I like the poems, and the thoughts. Keep up the good work!

I especially like your Fantasy Writer poem, but the entire book was well written and very interesting. :) I love how you use the reality of a mental patient's situation to your benefit, letting it build until the end when the shroud falls away and their insanity is evident. Very nice. :)

Ideas for a new poem constantly bombard me as I try to get some much needed sleep. I've been told to keep a notebook by my bed but it seems I am not awake enough to do that. I could relate to your second poem. Good job.Serena

I read the drabble poems as I promised. Each is excellent. The protagonist is quite mad. I find it refreshing, as it is the only way to survive the 21st Century culture in America which is based on illusion and lies and quite insane as well!

A reflection of an image refracted in a broken sea... I voted for your book. :-)

I enjoyed reading your poems. I like the first one about insanity. Just voted!

HI,
It sounds so hopeless...I think I've been there.
Keep up the good work...waiting to read more

I have two in the contest , pls check them out....thanks...Laz

I really liked these Cav, especially the second one. I really related to it as the same thing happens to me all the time. I lie in bed trying to sleep, and stories fill my head and I give up and go to the computer to write them. Fortunately, I "think" I am sane. Good luck with this. Val