Well done. Reading it reminded me of all the times my family gathered together. I loved it.
You write so well, Carmen, and even though your childhood was thousands of miles away from mine, I can relate. You paint a beautiful canvas of family that is very special. All I could have recommended for your family in those days was.....get a chamber pot!!!!
Valerie
A delightful look back...loved the details of this lively story.
...and I don't say that lightly. This story has everything to keep a person riveted to their chair from the very first paragraph.
This says 'fiction' on the front. Is this a true recollection of your childhood memories? Either way, it's a beautiful story, and I felt a measure of envy, for the close bond of your extended family.
Your story-telling abilities surely shine through with this beauty.
Good luck my friend, and a very... Show more
Thank you so much for your vote and your sweet comment.
Carmen :-)