BookRix

Hey this is pretty cool so far and definitely not what I thought it would be about. If this is inspiration from a dream then damn you should sleep more then wake up right away and write. Haha I think you should continue this book and since the protagonist believes he is "not going to safe anymore" then of course continue writing this book and bring in the conflict and antagonist(s). And since he lost the girl he loved maybe you should introduce a girl character eventually who knows what he's going through cause the same thing has happened to her or whatever. I don't know that's just some suggestions but whatever you do keep writing.

I am going to shut up now but nice work. *thumbs up* xP

~Jillian

Bravo! I hope it is okay if I add this to my group, "Underdog Books". A group for books that are great but do mot receive many hearts. It is sad that this book does not have many hearts. I think it is because people look for a good cover or if contains werewolf or vampire. This is amazing.