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Well written. A beautiful short story mirroring the idea of author touching sublime.
Ooh la la. Very nice. Although a bit sad. I say it is the man's lost anyway. Le tragic
I did go back and change my mistakes.
It seems no matter how much i look over my work there is always something i miss.
I really appreciate your help
thank you!
A suggestion: you keep writing "the women" when you should write "the woman" -- this is a little confusing. You have time to fix this. Good luck.
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