About half way through writing my rough draft, I actually realized that reference and how it related.
just read the first chapter, and I have to say well done, at least so far. I'm reminded of ancient rome, and the gap in wealth between the senators and the proletarians. Is that what you had in mind, or is that just my seeing references that aren't there (such as the guards resembling the Roman army in their discipline and strength)? msg me
So let me know when the entire story is finished please!
This is not the whole book. I have finished writing the rough draft (99 pages). I am posting the final draft as I write it. 38 pages of final draft is about 25 pages in rough... So it should be at least 150 pages with I'm done with the final draft. Again, this is the final draft as I write it.