BookRix

You're a nobody?
How must that feel.
now you know how everyone feels.
now you know how I feel.
now you know how other people feel.
Now how about you stop worring about your broblumes and think about other problumes in the world.

It's amazing MORE PLZ

I just updated. Plz let me know if you like it.

plz more!!!!!!!

I love this book!! Can you please update more! :)

Tell me when YOU WRITE MORE ITS A GREAT BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love-

Rose

Sorry I haven't been on in a long time its killing me too. I have school and then every time I go to the Public Library every computer is full and its killing me that I can't update. I'm at school right now giving you guys this message and don't worry I might just end up laughing if I get caught so anyway I will try to update soon. I am thinking that I need to redo some of the story that way it sounds better but I'm going to let you guys tell first if theres anything I need to fix besides grammer. Ok werdio here as to go I'm starting to panick just a teny teny tiny bit so comment please to let me no if theres anything i need to change Thanks and if any of you have time please look at the rest of my books and tell me what you think? I really would apreshate it. Thanks

addmore its great

I've updated. Sorry it took so long I have been trying to get my grades up and I have other books I'm trying to update too. I had 4 F's now I have only 2. Anyway I hope you all like the update and if you guys have time if you could look at the rest of my books and comment them and tell me what you think I would apreshiat it. Thanks.

Some of the paragraphs are a bit long, but otherwise it's on interesting story. It's a bit like a modern day Cinderelle, but ten times worse. I understand the robotic writing,as that seems the only way Vera can think now, as she isn't given much to do beside sleep, go to school, and work.

A good start :)

---RbG