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This book is horrible and you should feel horrible! You really need to put quotation marks when the characters are saying something. The plot, I didn't really get. Punctuation is a must before you publish a book. The death came a little too early and the whole "We will won't ever forgive you for not saving our daughter" thing, it's not necessary. I was like, "Really? That just gives it all away!" I would recommend to not write any more books.
there will be more after i wrote it i decided it was only the begining and it was the fist chapter
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