My Unwanted Marriage

By:
c.j.munro
User: c.j.munro
My Unwanted Marriage
Victorria Hudson was a happy girl, popular and beautiful. But on her 17th birthday her wold is flipped upside down. Now she doesn't know if she should love this man, or turn him down. But what will happen is she say no?
Will she fall in love? Will she end up happy? Maybe. Read to find out!

UNCOMPLETED NOVEL

  • Romance
  • 5180 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 4481
  • 170
  • Publication Date: 10-21-2011
Keywords: 
love, unwanted, marriage, drunk, evil, good, boy, girl
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torilol
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torilol

im only on chapter two and its great so far i love how its just ;ies and gosssip

c.j.munro
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c.j.munro

Thank you for your opinion, this is one of my first and it doesnt have any real emotion, please check out Wolf Pack..you may like that one better

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torilol
torilol

cheak out the book called 50 shades of blue

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Deleted User

You're right. It's good. But do any of you know what helpful criticism is?

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Deleted User

Its okay. But you have no plot structure. The climax is in the exposition and it's just a little bit confusing. And also in the exposition (climax?) you sounded really flat. I couldn't really hear your VOICE and that's one of the main things that make up good stories.

ashlyn1997
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ashlyn1997

u should really finish the book because it sounds really good and i cant wait to see what comes next

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