This is better than most I've read, though your summary could use some work, it just sounds like someone explaining something off the top of their head. I like the idea though.
As far as I've read, I don't know much about the MC or her family currently enough to really feel like what transpired in chapter two was justified. It felt empty and very filler-y. Like you wanted to write but you did it as you typed rather than... Show more
Hey! For those of you who read my books and enjoy them, I should let you know I am working on getting out updates as much as possible! I haven't been updating and that is completely my fault if you wanna know when a certain book is to be updated lemme know otherwise thnx!
WTF I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!! I CANT BELEIVE YOU ENDED IT THERE!! PPLZ UPDATE
Omg, this was a great story but why did she have to die :( :( :( :( I cried on the last page. Pleassseeeee write another one but with a happy ending :') Xavier and Ana are an adorable couple. <3
Awwwww thank! That means so much too me! I have already started the sequel Revelations so check it out...However u might not enjoy the direction I am thinking of sending Revelations... Thanks again! Glad u liked it!
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