Gone
This story takes place around the late 1950’s. Jane falls in love with the mystery boy she meets at a get together at the beach with her friends. One problem with this is that Jane and this boy don’t know anything about each other or the others name. After fate brings them back together they instantly connect. They never leave each others side... until Alan, the mystery boy, enlists in the army. He thinks he will find himself and it will mold him into the man he wants to be today. He thinks it will make him and Jane stronger but it only tears them apart. Once he leaves Jane is heart broken but Jane knows that love only finds you once. She will not except that he is gone. They write week. The letters are what gets Jane through her world and what gets Alan through. After a while Jane kept sending letters but Alan’s have stopped. He doesn’t write back and Jane doesn’t receive any. Jane asks his parents but they haven’t heard anything either. Jane doesn’t except that he’s gone. He can’t be gone. The only things that she can think of that would make him stop writing to her is that he died but she cant grasp that concept. What happens? Is he dead? Does she receive another letter? Read and find out. After you’ve read, like and comment!

  • Fiction
  • 32594 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 816
  • 20
  • Publication Date: 02-11-2012
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arosad12
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arosad12

this is such a great story, i literally cried, i love your way of writing <3 <3

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Your writing is captivading. It made me cry many times. For some reason, I had a feeling Alan wasn't gone. I loved the whole concept of the book, I just couldn't stop reading. It was mesmerizing, and very detailed. I really do think you should re-check some of your spelling and grammer though. And in some sentences you have missing words. But other than those things, all in all I enjoyed going back in time in your romantic,... Show more

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Deleted User

omg!!!!!!!!!! it was an amazing book!!!!! im rlly happy jane and alan ended up bak together :)

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Deleted User

sooooo good!!! i hope you rite more!!! this book brought me to tears...hope something good happens and maybe brings alan and jane bak together

wiings
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wiings

What?! How could you let him die?
I can just agree with moolight98. I don't want her with Ken, she must be with Alan at the end!... Such a sad story… :(

But i think it's really good! :)

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Deleted User

I am sitting on my bed in tears and then you just stop it. Why did he die come on you can't let him die I don't want her with Ken i want her with Alan I want Alan the public wants Alan we all do. I crying even harder gosh man! :'''''''''( you see that so many tears.

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It's a interesting story, but I'm not at the end. Please excuse the worse english, but I'm a german and at school we don't learn that good english! But I understand your story and I like it! :-)
So, I'll read your story soon I can. ;-)

Love,
Kleeblättchen

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