Triggy

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brooke672
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Triggy
Marianne has the most annoying sister on the face of the Earth.
Possibly my submission for the twist ending contest.

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Rgabel
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Rgabel

I was very impressed with your simple, clear voice. You have done a nice job with this story. Just enough. The dialog was crisp. Especially loved your metaphors - meatball of fury - a thousand bunnies jumping you. Great unusual visuals. For your age, this is very good writing. Nice job! Robynn

sereni
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sereni

Cute story about real a life situation and I love the song. Serena

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