Arialas

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bman7720
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Arialas

Step right up! Step right up! Come and see the amazing, the mystical, the mind boggling City of Tomorrow! For a low price of Fifty Caps, you can catch an Airbus to Arialas, the City in the Sky!


  • Adventure
  • 5827 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 578
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 01-14-2015
Keywords: 
steampunk, adventure, romance
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felixthecat
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felixthecat

Okay, you write like you've pretty much mastered the language...and I like your plot so far!

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bman7720
bman7720

Thank you, and English is my mother language and it's just the intricate rules that trump me, as well as some spelling

felixthecat
felixthecat

Join the club. That's why we all have editors:) Yeah, even Hemingway did.

RevkenR
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RevkenR

I don't usually read steampunk, but I liked the cover, and your blurb really caught my attention. Then when I read the book I was thoroughly impressed.

It was very well written and the descriptiveness made me feel as if I were right there with the characters.

You are indeed a very talented writer. I look forward to seeing what happens next in Arialas.

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bman7720
bman7720

Thank you! It truly means a lot to see that I can create an environment that another person can feel and see.

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