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Okay, you write like you've pretty much mastered the language...and I like your plot so far!
Important Post
I don't usually read steampunk, but I liked the cover, and your blurb really caught my attention. Then when I read the book I was thoroughly impressed.
It was very well written and the descriptiveness made me feel as if I were right there with the characters.
You are indeed a very talented writer. I look forward to seeing what happens next in Arialas.
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bman7720
Thank you! It truly means a lot to see that I can create an environment that another person can feel and see.
Thank you, and English is my mother language and it's just the intricate rules that trump me, as well as some spelling
Join the club. That's why we all have editors:) Yeah, even Hemingway did.