she waits . . . part 2

she's still waiting . but will all that waiting finally pay off ? By:
noodle513
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she waits . . . part 2
  • Fiction
  • 1168 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 435
  • 8
  • Publication Date: 06-10-2011
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arkmeans
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arkmeans

So despite a few grammatical errors I rather enjoyed this. My advice is to just try and proof read your work a couple of times before you post to insure as less errors as possible so that it won't effect the flow of the story for your readers, other than that nice job.

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