your book is realy good you should finished I can't wait to read the end.:)
Write MORE!!!! Please and don't break them up please they are so cute and please don't kill either of them out if you kill anyone out make it bucky and don't make Carlos the murderer I couldn't take it if he went to jail for freaking ever and let them have make up sex and she get pregnant not telling how to write just some ideas please take them into consideration :)