Interesting storyline, but it is a little hard to read. Every time a new person starts talking, try to make a new paragraph. Keep writing and good luck!
Very nicely done. You kept my attention. A few spelling errors but overall very nice.
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bookaholic25
thank you very much. I appreciate it. I'll work hard to fix the errors. Spell check won't work. XD but thank you very much.
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